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#51 9/22/2012 12:13 am

NickRuf7
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Re: My books

Reagan gave me great advice too, and most of the people in my classes cant make a character even talk correctly and i am 11

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#52 9/22/2012 12:57 am

thebigdonginthesky
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Re: My books

NickRuf7 wrote:

“Where is your daddy?” asked Chester.

NickRuf7 wrote:

most of the people in my classes cant make a character even talk correctly


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#53 9/22/2012 8:54 pm

Walrus King
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Re: My books

NickRuf7 wrote:

i know tons on dystopians but i didnt want to write a 8000000  sentence post so i kinda simplified it for the newbies

Saying that a dystopian novel is a post-apocalyptic novel is not simplifying the definition, it's just giving an incorrect definition.

Also, fuck you.

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#54 9/23/2012 3:52 am

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NickRuf7 wrote:

I loved animal farm and even a 3rd grader could tell that Blackwood is another person alogether. How can you stand in front of yourself? I couldnt paragraph it on this if i could do you think it would look like that? Ill take what you said about the android being a tall black man, but it sounds like you just grazed the first two pages
oh and bigdonginthesky it dosent look proffesional because when iposted it on twboards.com it deleted all my tabs

Alright, you little shithead. Maybe if you could write an original, entertaining piece that could captivate my attention instead of this choppy, inconsistent 7000000 word pile of dick, I could be bothered to distinguish between Blackwood and the other uninteresting individuals your brain conjured up. Undermining me to a 3rd grader? That's a pretty good insult for an 11 year old.

How can I stand in front of myself? I can't. It's impossible.

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#55 9/23/2012 4:31 am

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#56 9/23/2012 4:35 am

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mongo copy and paste nicks story in the question box and see what people think

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#57 9/23/2012 6:59 pm

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Ninjamongoose wrote:

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That's pretty funny.

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#58 9/24/2012 10:48 am

NickRuf7
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sry bout that ralph i wont call him a tall black man so much. Sry for what i said but please realize. You said my writing isnt terrible (meaning its not good or bad) but it seemed as though you just grazed it. When i said that you couldnt stand in front of yourself, i meant that noone could stand in front of themselves. It wasnt an insult, so dont take it the wrong way.


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#59 9/24/2012 10:49 am

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but bigdong the message i wrote to you still stands


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#60 10/28/2012 7:34 pm

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Why did you post that here.


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